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Re: Story writing thread!

Postby Weasley » Thu May 07, 2009 8:57 am

...his eyes growing heavy. As soon as he had fallen asleep he was woken by a huge shudder and deafening bang.
"Yarrgghhh!" he yelled as his bunk slid across the floor, crashing in to furniture and finally flipping on to it's side. The sound of hurried footsteps grew louder outside his cabin door as the Captain gathered his thoughts and straightened his nightcap.
"Captain! Come quickly!" the deck hand called under the sound of his fists beating on the door. "You have to see this!"
The Captain pulled on his overcoat and slid the bolt open. Opening the door he could see the look of terror on his deck hands face.
"Follow me," the young man said beckoning Captain Mathews to follow him down the dark corridor and back on deck...
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Re: Story writing thread!

Postby Bel Bel » Thu May 07, 2009 9:42 am

As the captain approached the deck he could already see the giant tenticles flaying in the sea.
He rubbed his eyes in disbelief. This creature was at least 10ft high and that was just the part he could see sticking out of the water. The tentacles were numerous and stretched to a distance of 30ft. The suckers were the size of dinner plates.
The creature was coming nearer and as he approached the water was becoming more turbulent and large waves were starting to form...
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Re: Story writing thread!

Postby dipsydoodlenoodle » Thu May 07, 2009 10:07 am

large waves were starting to form....

around the giant tentacles. Suddenly as if by magic the sky turned the most glorious shade of blue and the mysterious creature disappeared. The Captain and the deck hand stared at each other in disbelief...amazed even. The entire crew were looking up into the amazing blue sky, deck hand Charlie pointed out that there wasn't even a cloud in the sky. The entire crew were silent, pondering what had just happened to them and their lucky escape from the sea creature, when all of a sudden the boat rocked violently and the entire crew ran for cover. After sitting in darkness for an hour or so too scared to come back on to the deck of the ship, they looked around and were horrified at what they saw...
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Re: Story writing thread!

Postby dipsydoodlenoodle » Thu May 07, 2009 3:04 pm

apart from a pair of mice. Captain Mathews wondered to himself where all his crew had gone, and why on earth he'd not seen any mice on his boat before now.

A flash of light erupted in the sky and down floated the most beautiful woman he'd ever seen in his entire life - she was holding an umbrella in the air like Mary Poppins, it was only when the beautiful lady gracefully touched down on to his ship that he realised in fact she was not Mary Poppins and she resembled Gollum from lord of the rings more. The lady announced in a magical voice that her name was "Patricia" and that she was in fact his fairy god mother sent down to wake him out of this nightmare. Patricia preceeded in taking off her trench coat, Captain Mathews crew all started appearing as if by magic out of the ships nooks and crannies; they were all amazed at the sight of Patricia; deck-hand Charlie was lost of words at the sight of Patricia's...
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Re: Story writing thread!

Postby Bel Bel » Fri May 08, 2009 12:11 pm

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A loud crash woke the captain from his sleep and he realised the whole thing had been a dream.
He got up to investigate the crash only to find all his shipmates asleep on deck, or passed out drunk, and they had crashed into a large rock.
Water was seeping into the boat at a rate of knots.
He ran to Charlie and shook he abruptly awake.
"You fool, I left you in charge and look what you've done. Wake the others and start bailing out immediately. I will prepare the life raft incase we need it"
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