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Postby fairy of darkness » Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:37 pm

One of mine:

And I’m hurting, I’m bleeding ,I’m losing
And I’m crying, I’m shouting, I’m screaming
And I’m hoping to god I get through this
Cuz I’ve got nowhere else when I’m done with this

And I’m talking, and no one is listening
And I’m trapped in this cage that you’re building
And I’m hoping to god I break out of this
Cuz I’ve got no where else when I’m done with this

And I’m walking to the end of the road
And I’m standing unafraid but alone
And I’ve got nothing else to lose from this
Cuz I’ve got no where else when I’m done with this

And I’ve reached the end of the road
And I’m flawed, unafraid and alone
And I await the train coming down the tracks
And I hope for somewhere better when I’m done with this
Constantly moving
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Postby Ogadai » Sun Jun 08, 2008 1:11 am

there was one that i only thought of about 2 days ago so it might not be brilliant:

Krystal, clear and precious,
a gem among stones, so divine
an insight to my dreams of late
with a delicate, graceful shine
do not be beguiled by her
do not attempt to refine her
she has a misleading character
for beneath that divine exterior
encaged within her
is a torturous heartbreaker

P.S. Krystal is deliberately spelt with a K and torturous is a word
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Postby Bel Bel » Mon Jun 09, 2008 12:18 pm

steer clear of Krystal then Ogadai
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Postby Ogadai » Mon Jun 09, 2008 4:26 pm

hey... it was just to keep it going! she isn't really, purposefully breaking me. it's my fault really. funny enough it's her i'm talking about in 'moving relationships'
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Re: Poetry

Postby Ogadai » Sat Nov 29, 2008 3:29 am

Have you ever reached for hope and yet found it slip out of your hand,
Have you ever felt alone, cornered or dislocated from life,
Have you ever cried towards the skies to find no reply,
Have you ever smelt danger when someone who you trust approaches,
Have you ever seen a person belittled until they were unrecogniseable,
Have you ever lost the war of love.

Have you ever been pushed just that little bit further to grasp success with ease,
Have you ever felt a presence that has introduced you to a new life,
Have you ever called towards the heavens and felt blessed by those who watch over you,
Have you ever smelt the aroma of security as a stranger approached you,
Have you ever succeeded in reviving the spirit of a broken person,
Have you ever spread the word of love.

Yes that is mine as it may seem hard to believe... literally the first stanza is about how i was before i found my faith and the second shows how much further i have come since. I still think i've got some editing to do to it but it's a working progress obviously...
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Re: Poetry

Postby Fidel » Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:25 pm

I saw a frog

Oh my Goad! It was a toad
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Re: Poetry

Postby fairy of darkness » Thu Feb 19, 2009 2:12 pm

I am selfish.

I am wrong.

I turn the wrong way.

I don't follow your suit

I want you to get why this hurts.
But the truth is you cant.
Because of what i am.
You dont even know it hurts full stop.
Because for you its all a front.
A label i have across my face.
So you cant see what it really looks like.
I cant ever let you in.
Not really.
I have shame on myself.
For the way that i feel.
You arent mine.
You arent supposed to be.
Its just my mind.
My twisted mind.
Trying to tell itself that im right.
But i know.
Yes.
Yes.
I know.
I am all wrong
But my words
Make my sense
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