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Postby HappyGoLucky » Sat Oct 13, 2007 10:00 am

A nice and peaceful one I did.
It's called "The Perfect World." =)

Lively birds flutter in the sky,
The clouds sail softly by,
The World is peaceful and serene,
There is no war or an ugly scene.

The shining lake is crystal clear,
There is no wine or beer,
That make mad people madder still,
Till they take that awful pill.

No quarrels or fights,
No bad frights,
That is my idea,
Of a Perfect World.

Hope you all liked it! =)
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Postby pink stripes » Sat Oct 13, 2007 12:59 pm

-W3N- wrote:A nice and peaceful one I did.
It's called "The Perfect World." =)

Lively birds flutter in the sky,
The clouds sail softly by,
The World is peaceful and serene,
There is no war or an ugly scene.

The shining lake is crystal clear,
There is no wine or beer,
That make mad people madder still,
Till they take that awful pill.

No quarrels or fights,
No bad frights,
That is my idea,
Of a Perfect World.

Hope you all liked it! =)


V good :D

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Postby HappyGoLucky » Sun Oct 14, 2007 4:01 am

=) Thanks! The Perfect World is one of my favourites!

Another one I did a two or three years back because of the haze in Malaysia:-

What is this choking smell,
It is haze as I can tell.
Why did Indonesia?
Pass it to Malaysia?

We have to stop burning,
Its killing,
Our wonderful Earth,
Which is where our mothers gave birth.

So let us all,
Till the haze eventually does fall,
Save the homelands,
Leave it staying where it stands.
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Postby phunkyvida » Wed Nov 07, 2007 9:57 pm

Seasons of You
Autumn was lonely,
For I did not hear your voice,
You were angry, again, and
Consequently, mute, by choice.

Winter was harsh,
For I could not tell,
If your stolen heart,
Was mine as well.

Spring brought me hope,
I saw you smile, after all,
Like the damp ground,
It had begun to thaw.

Summer brought only longing,
Beating down with the sun's fire.
You fed me bitter slivers of temptation,
And left, unkempt, my desire.

it's awful i know...
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Postby pink stripes » Wed Nov 07, 2007 11:20 pm

phunkyvida wrote:Seasons of You
Autumn was lonely,
For I did not hear your voice,
You were angry, again, and
Consequently, mute, by choice.

Winter was harsh,
For I could not tell,
If your stolen heart,
Was mine as well.

Spring brought me hope,
I saw you smile, after all,
Like the damp ground,
It had begun to thaw.

Summer brought only longing,
Beating down with the sun's fire.
You fed me bitter slivers of temptation,
And left, unkempt, my desire.

it's awful i know...
xxx
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It's not awful - Its brilliant :D Well I think so anyway :)

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Postby HappyGoLucky » Thu Nov 08, 2007 5:00 am

It's not awful phunkyvida! I think it sounds lovely! :D
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Postby pink stripes » Mon Nov 26, 2007 1:53 pm

This just sort of came to my while I couldn't sleep so I wrote it down and decided to share it with you guys on here;

"And Now I Dream...."

Eventually, after spending a night in this world on mine I discovered that all I felt was that I didn't acually belong here,
I felt myself just drifting off to into a deep sleep,
I open my eyes,
Just slightly to get myself familiarised with the current surroundings that I am now faced with,
I like it because it's different,

I am sat cross legged looking into a deep, enchanted beautiful forest,
Theres sounds that have never entered my ears before,
Very soft and delicate sounds,
I close my eyes for a second,
All I hear are thses souns,
I feel a sense of content and I know I belong here,

I open my eyes once more,
Just slightly again,
To my relief, nothing has changed in this place that I have never been before yet I feel I am destined to stay here,

There is a stunning fairy that flutters just near me,
She gives off a tinzy buzzing sound as flutters on passed me,
There must be different language because I don't understand what she is singing,
But, becuase its different and new, I like it,
It sounds beautifuland I wish I could understand,

Suddenly, it turns dark in what was the most beautfiul place that I have ever set eyes on,
It goes very cold,
No longer do I feel a sense of content,
I wake up,
And now I know I was dreaming x
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Postby pink stripes » Mon Nov 26, 2007 2:07 pm

what you think?
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Postby HappyGoLucky » Mon Nov 26, 2007 2:48 pm

Very creative, pink stripes! :D
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Postby pink stripes » Mon Nov 26, 2007 3:06 pm

thankyou, -W3N- :)

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Postby HappyGoLucky » Sat Apr 05, 2008 3:27 pm

Just wrote this. What do you think?

The rain patters on the ground,
The Earth weeps,
Don’t you hear the sound?
Trees are falling,
One by one,
A choking smell,
Gathers round,
Inhaled by our children,
So innocent, so young,
Why must the next generation be deprived?
Of good, healthy and fresh air?
It just simply isn’t fair,
The Earth is dying,
How much longer?
Are you ignoring?
Open your eyes,
Please don’t wait,
To prevent the Earth’s,
Dark, sad fate.
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Postby Pwif » Sat Apr 05, 2008 8:34 pm

HappyGoLucky wrote:Just wrote this. What do you think?

The rain patters on the ground,
The Earth weeps,
Don’t you hear the sound?
Trees are falling,
One by one,
A choking smell,
Gathers round,
Inhaled by our children,
So innocent, so young,
Why must the next generation be deprived?
Of good, healthy and fresh air?
It just simply isn’t fair,
The Earth is dying,
How much longer?
Are you ignoring?
Open your eyes,
Please don’t wait,
To prevent the Earth’s,
Dark, sad fate.

Brilliant, and very moving. =D>
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Postby HappyGoLucky » Sun Apr 06, 2008 1:30 am

Thank you, Pwif. :D
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Postby morris mouse » Mon Jun 02, 2008 12:41 pm

I wrote this poem myself (about my dog,called Kirsty!!!!)


Kirsty


I have a dog called kirsty
She's as gorgeous as can be,
When I take her for a walk,
She does a pooh & pee.
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She is a West Highland (white)
The best that you can buy,
And,when I lose her,
I'm really going to cry.
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I bought her as a puppy
Eight weeks,& full of fun,
And even though she's older,
The fun is never done.
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And now this poem's at an end
My dog,for whom it's written,
I honestly,can really say,
I prefer having her,to cats or kittens!!!!!
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Postby xXxThe_EnchantressxXx » Tue Jun 03, 2008 10:41 pm

Here's an "emo"/bullying poem (i'm not an emo though)

I walk through the door
I hear laughter again
It whips through my ears
Like an ache or a pain

What did I do
To be ridiculed each day?
A joke to you
And a price I pay

So maybe this is my fate
Play voodoo doll for my peers
But it's not too late
I'll get rid of my fears

The knife lies beside
Opposite my left hand
As I prepare to reside
In a faraway land.....

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